Group 4.
Yafet Bisrat
Michael Mooney
Liam Rushfirth
Sadie Thompson
Sophie Wilson
The notes from the feedback session with Group 4:
- Think about expanding the scale & more environments.
- Experiment with sans-serif typefaces.
- Get people's responses.
- Think about having a logo within the stencils.
- Shorter quotes to relate to the attention span of target audience.
- Lead them somewhere, such as a book store.
- More vinyl work would allow for a broader point of view.
- Target a younger audience that need to develop reading skills.
- Think about using a different medium eg. glitter, chalk.
- Reference and ask why they like it.
Written feedback from the group:
Feedback from Group 4 to Group 6
Written by Sophie Wilson
Overall, we felt very impressed by your project- your blogs evidenced a wealth of primary and secondary source research which was well linked through your design practice to your design context. A good range of source material demonstrated your design developments well.
We felt that the outcomes had been well considered, and the experimentation was evident. However, you could perhaps consider expanding this further by altering the scales of your written quotes, the locations (perhaps in a slightly more “safe” environment- where they would be seen but not trodden on- by a plinth or statue in a park perhaps?), and even the material used to create them- perhaps experimenting with colours, textures and different typefaces also.
We also feel that you could consider the further documentation and feedback from your outcomes- whilst it was evident that it was a success to a point- it would have been interesting to gauge people’s responses in a questionnaire or personal quote- finding out whether this would inspire them to go on and read further.
A really strong project, evidently showcasing good team work and a balanced effort; but, most importantly- answering the brief in a professional and creative application of design.
Written by Sophie Wilson
Overall, we felt very impressed by your project- your blogs evidenced a wealth of primary and secondary source research which was well linked through your design practice to your design context. A good range of source material demonstrated your design developments well.
We felt that the outcomes had been well considered, and the experimentation was evident. However, you could perhaps consider expanding this further by altering the scales of your written quotes, the locations (perhaps in a slightly more “safe” environment- where they would be seen but not trodden on- by a plinth or statue in a park perhaps?), and even the material used to create them- perhaps experimenting with colours, textures and different typefaces also.
We also feel that you could consider the further documentation and feedback from your outcomes- whilst it was evident that it was a success to a point- it would have been interesting to gauge people’s responses in a questionnaire or personal quote- finding out whether this would inspire them to go on and read further.
A really strong project, evidently showcasing good team work and a balanced effort; but, most importantly- answering the brief in a professional and creative application of design.
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